I considered not finishing the book several times as I was reading. I think it could have been a short story once all the blah blah blah was removed. I forced myself to keep reading hoping it would get better. My main problem with it was the rambling in first person. I just wanted to stick to the story. I also agree with other reviewers regarding the use of "Little did I know"...,etc. Why bother to say that? Just let me figure that out within the story. In the end, I felt like those were just a poor choice of teaser to string me along, because I didn't find out what Mac meant by any of those comments. Maybe I missed something, but I was expecting so much more.I also agree with other reviewers that even though this is a series, each book should be able to stand alone. I felt cheated in the end. It is possible to have a cliffhanger and a full story in one book and leave the reader with satisfaction along with a feeling of anticipation at the same time.
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